The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph has demonstrated the trend of overseas visitor's preference in three different areas in European countries since 1987 to 2007. The overal number of visitors increased from 70000 in 1987 to 150000 in 2007 with minor shifts in preference. During the two decades, there are 2 downglide among three areas in general. Other changes are explained as below.
In 1987, most of the tourist chose the coast as their destination, which is twice more than the mountain visitor and 4 times more than the lake visitors by that time. After 5 years, the number of visitors to coast has dropped whereas the number of visitors to lakes and the mountains has risen. The scope of increase in mountain visitors was less than the lake visitors.
After the first decade, the trend of mountain vistors has gradually increased and for lake visitors the growth extent is more significant. After the drop point in 1992, the coast visitor population started to grow. The trendency since 1997 has shifted from mountains to lakes and coast. The number of lake visitors has reached the peak in 2002 and also the inclination of coast vistors is sharper than the increase in mountain visitors.
Moving on to 2007, the coast visitors is contiunually rising so as the mountain visitors but only with gradual increase. However, the lake visitors has dropped prominently from the peak.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'visitors'' or 'visitor's'?
Suggestion: visitors'; visitor's
... has demonstrated the trend of overseas visitors preference in three different areas in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, whereas, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96943231441 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50189760365 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502183406114 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6321340717 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5384615385 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195776775798 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862981178712 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093202621913 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145450032637 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113384763925 0.0819641961636 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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