It is argued that a high tendency of people increasingly affording to purchase products with bargain prices. This essay will acknowledge that the disadvantageous impacts outweigh the advantages. This essay will first demonstrate that buying cheaper products leading to an overall domestic economic depression and that it degrades human life quality, followed by an analysis of how the primary advantage of suitable price for almost families to afford.
A depression of domestic economy could be witnessed within a specific country as citizens show their interests in bargain-price commodities. Cheaper products imported from neighboring countries results in a rivalry competitive market with domestic industries and companies reducing the overall manufacturing productivity. A prime example is that importing Thailand rice to Vietnam has been recently reported to reduce 45% gross domestic products of Vietnamese agriculture in 2016. On the other hand, purchasing cheaper products easily causes a decrease in the development of human life. The cheaper the price is, the less qualitative the product is. A survey has been carried out by the Vietnamese government indicates that 70% of bargain cabbages exporting from China for Vietnamese farmers contains chemical contaminants which has not been clearly washed away causing lots of medical issues, namely headache, stomachache and so on for local farmers.
Those opposed to this advocate that it is an appropriate price for most people to afford. However, there is no actual evidence to support this view and government also takes into action to solve this problem. For example, Malaysian government has enacted economic law to support 50% price of the household products.
On balance, the fact that buying cheaper price influences badly to the local economy and leads to human health depression clearly outweighs the flawed argument that it is affordable for most people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Thailand) must be used with a third-person verb: 'rices'.
Suggestion: rices
...rime example is that importing Thailand rice to Vietnam has been recently reported t...
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Line 3, column 400, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'reported reducing'.
Suggestion: reported reducing
...iland rice to Vietnam has been recently reported to reduce 45% gross domestic products of Vietname...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 5.60731707317 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 965.302439024 170% => OK
No of words: 293.0 196.424390244 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59726962457 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9131527221 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 106.607317073 164% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597269624573 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 283.868780488 179% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.763773464 43.030603864 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.153846154 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171914922547 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642121478941 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492977788145 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105727984638 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623869005403 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 11.4140731707 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.6 8.06136585366 131% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 40.7170731707 268% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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