Percentage of students proficient in a foreign language
The following vertical illustrates the proportion of men and women students who were proficient in a foreign language in distinct countries.
The most striking feature to be observed is that women proficiency head highest percentage in given nations.
It can be vividly seen that. for India males the proficiency in q foreign language had highest about 56% followed by Romania, Vietnam and Russia with 42,37 and 35% respectively. Thailand and China accounted for approximately 29 and 15% orderly. For India, women led with near about 70% proficiency in foreign language whereas, Romania, Vietnam and Russia occupied second, third and fourth position with 63,49 and 42% respectively.
Turning to the rest of the description, for Thailand women stood at lowest position with 28% . As far as comparisons are concerned, in China, women proficiency in a foreign language was two times more as compared to the proportion of men. The percentage of women proficiency was almost highest as compared to male.
- Demand for gas and oil is increasing and so finding new resources in a remote and untouched area is necessity Do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages 78
- Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment only comments and large companies can make a difference what extend do you agree or disagree 78
- Some people think that public health within a country can be improved by government making laws regarding nutritious food Others however think that health is a matter of personal choice and responsibility Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- Some people believe that students should pay their University fees themselves as they benefit from having University studies and not the society as a whole To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- The map shows the changes of an office building between present and the future 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, so, third, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96215715316 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59748427673 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.1904270986 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2222222222 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355174046699 0.215688989381 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139205359652 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110328311561 0.0843802449381 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221567901628 0.15604864568 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702903749811 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.