The below pie chart represents the utilization of daily recommended quantity of fruit and vegetable by UK people during the years 2000,2006 and 2010.The calibration of data is in percentage and it is categorized by Men,Women and children
Overall, it is precised that, most of the resources consumption is by women in all the years, whereas the least usage is for children.
Firstly, in the year 2002, women are one of the mostly used resources,however men utilization stood after them.It can be seen accurately that consumption of resources is the lowest for children in the initial year.
Secondly, there is an exponential improvement in women to 32% by the second year, furthermore it is depicted that men also rose in similar to ladies with 26%.Children along with two others got increased to 18% which shows a drastic result.
Finally, all kinds got a slight decline from 2006 to 2010.Men and children got decreased with a moderate change of 2%. Nevertheless Women rate of consumption has plummeted by 6% in the last year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04651162791 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02473130363 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.732870953 43.030603864 246% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 173.6 112.824112599 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.4 22.9334400587 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 19.2 5.23603664747 367% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0831261775114 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416980621485 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543445506145 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0509829367933 0.15604864568 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752413595571 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.2329268293 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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