the percentage of visitors per month in Summer 2013
The line graph given illustrates the information about how many tourists came to three different Museums, namely British Museum, Science Museum and Natural History Museum over the course of four months in 2013 from June to September.
Overall, the Natural History Museum had a downward trend in the number of tourists whereas there was a considerable increase in the others.
In June, the British Museum was the most popular location, about 600 thousand visitors while just only 550 thousand people went to the Natural History Museum. At this point, the least favorite tourist attractions where was the Science Museum, around 400 thousand travelers.
0ver the summer in 2013, the British Museum witnessed a considerable fluctuation in the numbers visitors before going up slightly in September, just over 650 thousand. By contrast, the number of the Science Museum and Natural History Museum declined similarly before growing considerably in September 450 thousand and 480 thousand respectively. Furthermore, there were no movements in the percentage of visitors to the Natural History Museum over the period between July and August, just under 400 thousand.
- The presence of technology in the classroom has become more and more apparent and offers students tremendous resources with which to supplement their education. Given time, technology will completely replace the traditional teacher in the classroom. 73
- The bar chart below gives information about the water use in China, USA, Russia Australia in 2010. 73
- The table below shows daily oil production in four countries from 2000 to 2004 70
- the percentage of visitors per month in Summer 2013 78
- The graph below shows the number of students from four different countries enrolled at Avago Language School in Sydney.Between 1990 and 2000 the composition of the student body changed and the Asian economic crisis seriously affected the overall number of 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, similarly, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68111824837 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572222222222 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9723777351 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.428571429 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10996775847 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573516806547 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609989406544 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0600179283742 0.15604864568 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498328393287 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.