The picture below shows the process of producing ceramic pots Summarizing the information by selecting and reporting the main features

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The picture below shows the process of producing ceramic pots. Summarizing the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The picture depicts the process of manufacturing ceramic pots.

In general, this linear process comprises twelve general steps, initiating with exploiting raw materials and culminating with ceramic pots.

To begin, a digger is responsible for exploiting raw materials, which is followed by a transportation of those materials to the plant by a truck, in which the sealed process of producing ceramic pots is conducted. Raw materials, then, are passed into a crusher. Once this step is completed, raw materials are turned into fine powder, which was undergone the process of being mixed with water (or stuff like that). Following this, the mixture can be shaped to assembled clay pots after being moulded and dried within 4-6 hours.

These assembled clay pots continue to be heated up in an oven with 1000 degrees celsius. After that, the heated pots are colored, with a subsequent color firing step, and completed with finished pots.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23178807947 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68857860073 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615894039735 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.3999936741 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.75 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13587419835 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688707564267 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646165739385 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104976285694 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633746353163 0.0819641961636 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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