The pictures below show how tea is produced. They also illustrate the process of making a cup of tea.
The diagram illustrates the process of making tea, and how a cup of tea is made. It can be seen that the process is quite simple with 18 stages, starting from sowing the tea seeds in India and China and terminating at enjoying a nice cup of tea at home.
To begin with, tea seeds are shown and then the sun shines, causing the seeds to grow into plants. When the plants have grown sufficiently, the leaves are then picked and put into baskets. Subsequently, the tea leaves are spread out in the sun to be dried. Once the final tea products have been packed into boxes, these boxes are then loaded onto lorries, which take them to supermarkets for sales.
In order to make a cup of tea, customers buy a box of tea and take it home from the supermarket. After filling the kettle with water and put it on the stove to boil, the water is poured into the cup. Having been left in the cup for two minutes, the teabag is then removed, and the tea is now ready to drink. At this point, milk and sugar can be added for more flavor. The whole procedure ends up with a nice cup of hot tea which is ready to be enjoyed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 356, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hese boxes are then loaded onto lorries, which take them to supermarkets for sale...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.17209302326 4.92477711251 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1593821603 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539534883721 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9934677202 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5454545455 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301109702566 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136640937893 0.103423049105 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149285583734 0.0843802449381 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230249326795 0.15604864568 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116353422881 0.0819641961636 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.91 11.4140731707 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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