The pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features
The given pictures demonstrate the way of making tomato ketchup step by step. Overall, there 15 steps to be done to produce a bottle of ketchup.
First of all, a farmer picks tomatoes from his farm and put in baskets. Then, he selects only good tomatoes from the ones he picked. After being sent to factory, the tomatoes will have a removal process in order to get rid of stalks, seeds, skins, etc. Having been collected into containers, the processed tomatoes are crushed and turned into liquid. Next, with adding sugar, salt and vinegar, they are ready to boil.
After being left for two hours to be set, the tomato liquid is filled into tomato ketchup bottle and labelled on the body of the bottle. The next step is, in order to make quality the best, inspectors check all their products. The bottles after passed quality control step are packaged in to the box. At just before the final stage, the manufacturer distributes its own ketchup to supermarkets. Finally, the customers enjoy the tomato ketchup with their food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7808988764 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32188367387 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657303370787 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.6683516531 43.030603864 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.9166666667 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156427286615 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576260599673 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468033277144 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110737559313 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171015831722 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.2329268293 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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