The pictures highlight the process by which tomato ketchup is produced and packed in order to be sold to customers.
It is noticed that there are 15 stages in the diagram, starting with harvesting tomatoes and finishing with using tomato ketchup as a flavor with some dishes at home.
The first step is that tomatoes are picked and the put in baskets. After that, they are divided into 2 groups: good and bad tomatoes so that tomato ketchup can get a high quality as possible. Good tomatoes are continuously delivered to factories, where they are removed some unnecessary parts, included removing stalks, skin, seeds. Having been stored in a container, tomatoes are crushed to become liquid. At this point, sugar, salt, vinegar are added. The next step is that the liquid is boiled and then left about 2 hours in order to get a right temperature.
After steps making tomatoes ketchup, it is poured into bottles, which are then labeled. Before being packed into boxes, the bottles are checked quality. Following this, these boxes are loaded onto lorries, which take them to supermarkets. The final step is that you buy a bottle of tomatoes ketchup and enjoy with hamburger and fries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 749.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92763157895 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41639103564 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677631578947 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3205051198 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263345239615 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962825455157 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705443398173 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205434306135 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248920898111 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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