The pie chart and table give information on transport and car use in Edmonton.
The graph illustrates energy consumption in the us from 1980 to 2012 and projected consumption to 2030.
Overall, the us will continue to rely on fossil fuels, with sustainable and nuclear energy sources remaining relatively insignificant.
Petrol and oil are the dominant fuel sources throughout this period, with 35 quadrillion units used in 1980, rising to 42q in 2012. Despite some initial fluctuation, from 1995 there was a steady increase. this is expected to continue, reaching 47q in 2030.
consumption of energy derived from natural gas and coal is similar over the period. From 20q and 15q respectively in 1980, gas showed an initial fall and coal a gradual increase, with the two fuels equal between 1985 and 1990. consumption has fluctuated since 1990 but both now provide 24q. coal is predicted to increase steadily to 31q in 2030, whereas after 2014, gas will remain stable at 25q.
In 1980, energy from nuclear, hydro and solar./wind power was equal at only 4q. nuclear has risen by 3q. and solar/wind by 2.after slight increases, hydro-power has fallen back to the 1980 figure. It is expected to maintain this level until 2030, while the others should rise slightly after 2025.
- There are many zoos in the world. What are the benefits and drawbacks of keeping animals in zoos. 11
- The graph compares employment rates in three sectors of the economy, in the UK, 2000 - 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 11
- the number of cases of X disease in Someland between 1960 and 1995. 56
- Wild animals have no place in the 21st century. So protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree agree? 84
- Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films Whycould this be Should governments give more financial support to local film industries 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25252525253 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66285693579 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651515151515 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7872828572 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2307692308 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07692307692 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00997984449826 0.215688989381 5% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00328642301808 0.103423049105 3% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.011384503285 0.0843802449381 13% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00599733168628 0.15604864568 4% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0119946633726 0.0819641961636 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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