The pie chart below gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets
The pie charts illustrate the percentage of carbohydrates, protein and fat in average diet, healthy diet and healthy diet for sport. Overall, it is obvious that the proportion of fat in three different diet is the lowest
The amount of carbohydrates is the same as protein in average diet, at 40 percent. The figures for healthy diet and healthy diet for sport are quite high, at 50 percent and 60 percent respectively. The percentage of fat is low, at one fifth in average diet and healthy diet and 15 percent in heathy diet for sport.
The proportion of protein in three different diets is lower than carbohydrates and higher than fat. It accounts for 40 percent in average diet, which is higher than in healthy diet by 10 percent, while it only reaches around 25 percent in healthy diet for sport
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...50 percent and 60 percent respectively. The percentage of fat is low, at one fifth ...
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...5 percent in heathy diet for sport. The proportion of protein in three differen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 669.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 141.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74468085106 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65198918313 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 62.0 106.607317073 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.439716312057 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 194.4 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6796843226 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 5.23603664747 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297250162164 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.208542074135 0.103423049105 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115983072754 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271324709963 0.15604864568 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145334407676 0.0819641961636 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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