The pie chart gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates protein and fat in three different diets

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The pie chart gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets.

The pie charts give the proportion of carbohydrates, protein, and fat in three types of diets, namely an average diet, a healthy diet for sport, and a healthy diet.
In 3 types of nutrients, carbohydrates are always higher than protein and fat, except in the situation of the average diet, it equal to protein. The healthy diet for sport has a quantity of carbohydrates higher than itself in the average diet and the healthy diet. Specifically, carbohydrates make up 60% of the meals for sports practice people, higher than 10% in the average meals and 20% compared with the healthy meals. The rate of carbohydrates ranges from 40% to 60%.
The oscillation range of protein is from 25% to 40%, equal to the number of carbohydrates in the average diet, it counts for 30% in the healthy diet, its distribution in the quality diet for sportspeople with less than two previous diets.
The limited domain of fat is from 15 to 20%. Always account for the lowest rate in the distribution of three nutrients. Diet for sportspeople less than the remaining two diets is 5%.
In the average diet, the largest difference rate between the two nutrients is 20%. These numbers in the healthy diet for sports and the healthy diet are 40% and 30%. The far distance numbers usually belong to caprbohydrates and fat.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 128, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'equals'?
Suggestion: equals
...n the situation of the average diet, it equal to protein. The healthy diet for sport ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ple with less than two previous diets. The limited domain of fat is from 15 to 20%...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1079.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79555555556 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80322213194 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.444444444444 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.2002866738 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9166666667 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.583333333333 5.23603664747 11% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320762355508 0.215688989381 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130805176404 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103961514306 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210258500765 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109185593631 0.0819641961636 133% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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