The pie chart gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates protein and fat in three different diets

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The pie chart gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets.

The pie charts reveal infomation on the percentage of different nutritions (Carbohydrates, Protein and Fat) in three kinds of diets. Unit are measured in percent (%).

From an overall perspective, there was a significant difference in the rate of three substenances among these diets. In fact, the figure for Carbohydrates accounted for the largest one in Healthy diet for sport, with 60% which was followed by the corresponding figures of Healthy diet and Average diet, with 50% and 40%, respectively.

Remarkbaly, the figure for Protein made up the highest level Average diet, with 40% which was followed by that of Healthy diet and Healthy diet for sport. Actually, these figures were found to be 30% and 25%, in that order.

It is interesting to note that, Fat seemed to be a kind of nutrition having the lowest rate among theses diet, comprising only 20% in Average diet and Healthy diet and 15% in Healthy diet for sport. Overall, the figure for Carbohydrates made up the highest one among three nutritions.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, in fact, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02366863905 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82635275509 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6079640233 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.125 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246575457321 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112546082672 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987168416034 0.0843802449381 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178497207828 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725572348086 0.0819641961636 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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