The pie chart below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010
The graphs underneath, indicates the average household expenditures in a country for year of 1950 and 2010. The miscellaneous of the expense such as housing, transportation, food, health care, education and other.
In 1990, this state has the mean of housing which was 72% and this is a highest than other. food category had an median of 11.2%. The denomination of education stood at 6.6%. after that, there other has value of 4.4%. next grade is transportation has a percentage of 3.4%. At last, health care in the finale position hold of worth for 2.4%.
In 2010, advanced 60 years later from the previous year, this country had the significant increased. highest outlay in this season held by food category which was 34%. next largest issuance had an value of 22% occupied by housing category. The line forward occur for other that had the mark of 19.2%. Hereafter of the part, transportation standing by grade of 14%. Furthemore, education necessity just had an value of 6.3%. last-ditch there health care needs which has the lowest grade for 4.5%.
In finding for these ratios of two differences year thats there some escalation and regression such as housing which had highest expenditures in the old year and got the deterioration in the comparison year with the greatest significance. food needs has second ranked before it and get first sequence after 60 years. Requisite of education in the third position and declined to fifth place with deep reduction. The next part, other requirement had the slight value and to go up to third place in the appeal season. next, transportation need in the season before had minimal expenditure figures and dissimilar with the next year which had medium percentage. Ultimate, health care needs has the lowest expense equal with last season.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...an of housing which was 72% and this is a highest than other. food category had a...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Food
...s 72% and this is a highest than other. food category had an median of 11.2%. The de...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...a highest than other. food category had an median of 11.2%. The denomination of ed...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...enomination of education stood at 6.6%. after that, there other has value of 4.4%. ne...
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Suggestion: Next
...er that, there other has value of 4.4%. next grade is transportation has a percentag...
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Suggestion: Highest
... country had the significant increased. highest outlay in this season held by food cate...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the highest'.
Suggestion: the highest
... country had the significant increased. highest outlay in this season held by food cate...
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Suggestion: Next
...on held by food category which was 34%. next largest issuance had an value of 22% oc...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...hich was 34%. next largest issuance had an value of 22% occupied by housing catego...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...urthemore, education necessity just had an value of 6.3%. last-ditch there health ...
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Suggestion: Last-ditch
...on necessity just had an value of 6.3%. last-ditch there health care needs which has the l...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...or these ratios of two differences year thats there some escalation and regression su...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the highest'.
Suggestion: had the highest
...on and regression such as housing which had highest expenditures in the old year and got th...
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Suggestion: Food
...on year with the greatest significance. food needs has second ranked before it and g...
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Suggestion: Next
...up to third place in the appeal season. next, transportation need in the season befo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, third, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 3.97073170732 428% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 965.302439024 155% => OK
No of words: 298.0 196.424390244 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03020134228 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7605296322 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 106.607317073 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51677852349 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 283.868780488 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 8.94146341463 235% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5092760319 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.380952381 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1904761905 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.7619047619 5.23603664747 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0795048203592 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0266418809021 0.103423049105 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868755711731 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831117685678 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108476218542 0.0819641961636 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.