The pie chart provides information about the e-buying habits in American youngsters. The preferences to purchase goods from online or physical stores is illustrated by the given bar graph. The year under consideration in 2015.
Overall, it is crystal clear that online purchasing habits less often was record maximum in U.S. adults' as compare to who buy weekly, a few times a month or never. The buyers show more preference for buying goods from physical store instead of online in all type of purchaser without who shop weekly.
At the first glance, it can be clearly seen from pie chart that in 2015 U.S. Adults who buy goods online less often was registered the highest value, that account about 37%. It was followed by a few times a month, having preposition of 28%. 20% was recorded in case of who never buy goods online. However, weekly buyers were the lowest by 15%.
Moving further towards bar graph, buy online products by American adults buyers were 35% in all shoppers, which were double in physical store that was 65%. While weekly online shoppers were more than offline by difference of quarter. Whereas, monthly physical shopper were recorded almost same as all shoppers, where online shoppers were 40%. Surprisingly, less often have maximum shopping from physical store that was 80% as compare to online that was only 20%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... is illustrated by the given bar graph. The year under consideration in 2015. Over...
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Line 2, column 158, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
... who buy weekly, a few times a month or never. The buyers show more preference for bu...
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Line 4, column 156, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... double in physical store that was 65%. While weekly online shoppers were more than o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.15609756098 380% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1115.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93362831858 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40118764177 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553097345133 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7358937529 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7692307692 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3846153846 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210179939628 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800244312488 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606333568912 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152861354247 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620822008528 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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