The pie chart provide data about visitors to the US from 4 countries Canada ,mexico,china and others between 1988 and 1992 .
It can be seen that the number of visitors from mexico was the highest but it decrease significantly year by year . On the contrary china was the lowest but is increase slightly. P
percentage of people visiting from Canada increase, and the others slightly significant . In 1988 the figure of mexico up to 53% but it decrease in 1992 about 40% . The figure of visitors from Canada in 1988 was the lowest about 10% but it increase around 30%. V
visitor from china in 1988 approximately 12% , it slightly decrease year by year about 4% . And the others slightly significant year by year .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...sitors to the US from 4 countries Canada ,mexico,china and others between 1988 and...
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Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , china
...o the US from 4 countries Canada ,mexico,china and others between 1988 and 1992 . It...
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Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...o,china and others between 1988 and 1992 . It can be seen that the number of vis...
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Line 2, column 79, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'decreases'?
Suggestion: decreases
...tors from mexico was the highest but it decrease significantly year by year . On the con...
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Line 2, column 114, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...t it decrease significantly year by year . On the contrary china was the lowest bu...
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Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ase, and the others slightly significant . In 1988 the figure of mexico up to 53% ...
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Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'decreases'?
Suggestion: decreases
...8 the figure of mexico up to 53% but it decrease in 1992 about 40% . The figure of visit...
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Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...to 53% but it decrease in 1992 about 40% . The figure of visitors from Canada in 1...
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Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
...in 1988 was the lowest about 10% but it increase around 30%. V visitor from china in 19...
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Line 4, column 45, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tor from china in 1988 approximately 12% , it slightly decrease year by year about...
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Line 4, column 60, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'decreases'?
Suggestion: decreases
...in 1988 approximately 12% , it slightly decrease year by year about 4% . And the others ...
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Line 4, column 90, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... slightly decrease year by year about 4% . And the others slightly significant yea...
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Line 4, column 141, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...others slightly significant year by year .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 589.0 965.302439024 61% => OK
No of words: 124.0 196.424390244 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.33699396548 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69605093345 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 63.0 106.607317073 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508064516129 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 173.7 283.868780488 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.5624171086 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.625 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347827510022 0.215688989381 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164432007921 0.103423049105 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149525359187 0.0843802449381 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247818865661 0.15604864568 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155711318647 0.0819641961636 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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