The pie chart shows the amount that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year
The pie charts give information about the total revenue and expenditure by a children's charity in the United States of America in one year.
The units of measurement is in dollars.
Overall it is evident that the major source of income was from foods donated to the charity which is about two-thirds of the total revenue while programme service was widely spent on with more than ninety five percent of the expenditure.The total expenditure was just within the income generated.
The income chart reveals that the total amount of money generated was 53,561,580 dollars with donated foods accounting for 86.6percent while the remaining sources, community contributions, programme revenue, investment income, government grants and others responsible for 10.4 percent,2.2percent,0.2percent,0.2percent and 0.4percent respectively.
The programme services was 95.8percent of the total spendings while fundraising and management and general accounted for 2.6percent and 1.6percent respectively.The total amount spent by the children charity was 53,224,896 dollars.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: are
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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... 2.6percent and 1.6percent respectively.The total amount spent by the children char...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.99342105263 4.92477711251 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.1457548875 2.65546596893 156% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.067252169 43.030603864 256% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 182.2 112.824112599 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4 22.9334400587 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160519115225 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995081504216 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102635898076 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995081504216 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102635898076 0.0819641961636 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.0 13.2329268293 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.11 61.2550243902 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 10.3012195122 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.05 11.4140731707 158% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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