The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year.
The children illustrates how much treasurer the American children Charitable organization spent in and received from different sources annually.
Overall, It is viewed that, donated food accounts the majority income while program services represents the greatest proportion of expenditure. Furthermore, the income in one year exceeds over the expenditure.
To begin, donated food is the major revenue source stands at 86.6% and provides approximately 6 times higher than other sources in the total revenue. Then, 10.4% and 2.2% of the total income are contributed by the community and program revenue respectively.Subsequently, investment income, government and other income provide the lowest amount under 1%.
On the contrary, programme services comprise 95.8% out of total expenditure and it is regarded as the highest percentage. Similarly, the amount spend in fund raising is the second highest proportion which is slightly higher than management and general.
As can be seen, the total income of charity is 53,561,580 dollars whereas, the total expenses is 53,224,896 dollars.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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The children illustrates how much treasurer the American childre...
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...ources in the total revenue. Then, 10.4% and 2.2% of the total income are contrib...
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... income are contributed by the community and program revenue respectively.Subsequ...
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...e total expenses is 53,224,896 dollars.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, second, similarly, so, then, whereas, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82608695652 4.92477711251 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27202469371 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639751552795 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6006745156 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.25 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 5.23603664747 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102449789416 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456929290815 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536070776752 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0571660799741 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493484129865 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 61.2550243902 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 10.3012195122 131% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 11.4140731707 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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