The pie chart shows information about world resources, and the bar chart shows the utilization of water in Egypt, Saudi Arabia and Canada
The given pie charts give information about which resources of water in the world come from while the bar chart illustrates the figures for water in term of three categories of Egypt, Saudi Arabia and Canada including domestic, Industry and Agricultural consumed.
In can clearly be seen that the proportion of water's resources comes from fresh water when Egypt and Saudi Arabia showed a similar trend about using water in three fields.
Looking at the information from the pie chart, a considerable percentage of fresh water comes from ground, compares to 20% of ice water and 10% of water on surface.
Based on the bar chart, it is noticeable that the figure for Agricultural exceeded that of industry in Egypt and Saudi Arabia, but the reverse was true in Canada. The demand for domestic consuming water did not change position in relation to each other among three nations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 739.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99324324324 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54135804846 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.537864306 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.8 112.824112599 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.436733111496 0.215688989381 202% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.223639774141 0.103423049105 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121014418275 0.0843802449381 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258373932938 0.15604864568 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887787612286 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 61.2550243902 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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