The pie chart displays the resource and spending distribution among different
countries.
We can see from the world spending pie diagram that themajor portion of spending
is on other items that is miscellaneous and only 12% is for housing ,24% for food and
18% for transport. So, almost half of our spending is for not useful things.We should
try to limit our spending to useful things and reduce the expense on miscellaneous
things. (This is an opinion)
When it comes to world's population, Asia contributes 57% of the world's
population. Countries like India, China,Japan are leading countries in terms of
population. Whereas Europe and America contribute 14 and 10 per cent
correspondingly. Rest of the 5% population is from other part of world.The human
population is growing adversely and continents like Asia should educate their people
and try to control the population.Based on the population distribution it is a very
obvious fact that people from Asia and Europe are consuming maximum resources
that are 60% and the rest at 40% is consumed by the remaining part of world.
Conculding this I would say that we should wisely spend on consumption of
resources, so that we can have sustainable development.
- Topic The graph below shows the number of inquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six month period in 2011 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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but, if, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1046.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25628140704 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06885043359 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592964824121 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
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Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 102.864899261 43.030603864 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 130.75 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.875 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 16.0 3.83414634146 417% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 99.0 1.69756097561 5832% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237728696403 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951512936874 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061778199316 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715878525499 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701802329205 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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