Topic The graph below shows the number of inquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six month period in 2011 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph illustrates the number of three types of enquiries that a Tourist
Information Office in a city received monthly from January to June 2011. The modes
of enquiries included in person, by letter/email and by telephone.

In general, there was an overall increase in the number of enquiries in June 2011 as
compared to January 2011. The number of telephone enquiries declined across the
six-month period, while the quantity of enquiries made in person and by letter/email
rose.

In January 2011, the least number of enquiries were made in person. However, this
figure rose sharply from about 400 to 1900 by June 2011. With regards to telephone
enquiries, the numbers decreased slightly from January to February 2011. This
decrease did not contribute significantly to an overall increase in numbers for the
next 5 months.

In contrast, enquiries by letter/email have showed a declining trend. The decrease
was negligible during the initial two-month period from January to March 2019 from
780 to 750. However, there was a sharp fall for the subsequent two months from
750 to 300 before the numbers started to plateau.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27027027027 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74397673592 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545945945946 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8459247613 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6363636364 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 3.83414634146 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 78.0 1.69756097561 4595% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172086907779 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729674404938 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757403211252 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692103642196 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626287670326 0.0819641961636 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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