Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today,
while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand
human's life.
People have different views about whether we can learn something from the past.
There are various reasons why we cannot learn anything from history, however, in
my opinion, I totally agree with the idea that we should treat history as a treasure to
be a valuable experiences for our modern life.
Admittedly, some people would believe they can gain nothing from the past for some
reasons. It is true that the life we live in has a different pattern compared to ancient
times, with the development of various technologies and the reform of the fabric of
society. Therefore, we are not supposed to use the same solutions as before to cope
with these new issues nowadays, like environment pollution, which never happened
before. Also, if we want to make progress for our today’s lives, we must continue to
develop new ideas when we face the problems rather than copying some from
history.
However, I would argue that we can and we should absorb some experiences from
history, because some events that happened in history can be a source for our
development. For instance, ancient Chinese people used some brilliant ideas like
building a dam to preserve some water resources in order to irrigate farms effectively
and fight for drought. Nowadays, we still preserve that method in some areas in
China to ameliorate the problems of the seasonal shortage of water. Furthermore, we
are able to learn some sports and characters from that. For exampl, some ancient
rituals are still conserved to transmit a social memes and as a media to make us
evoke our public duty.
In conclusion, I believe that history is full of resources we can learn for some factors,
although some people hold a different belief.
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Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0418834747 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.416666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 120.0 5.01903807615 2391% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395027590232 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150829055393 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806120564584 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110510429032 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797085844333 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.