The The pie chart illustrates information about world population in 1900 and 2000.
A quick look reveals that In 1900 there are only five countries population figure shown have while, In starting of 21 century six countries population data is displays. However In 1900 there was only 1.6 billion people but, After 100 years population rate increased by 4.4 billion respectively.
In last 20 century more than half of world population area was occupied by Asia (60%) second position was taken by Europe as well as including Russia had only 25 per cent. While, five per cent land was occupied by North Americans population and Africa carried only one per cent less population then North America. Rest of six per cent equal divided by Latin America not only but also by others countries.
In 2000, Asia Pacific (including former Soviet Asia) was reveal four per cent downward trend then past 100 years. Europe plus Russia pollution also decline by nine per cent now its only (14%)North America have only five per cent population as well as Middle east and North Africa had been only one per cent less than North America. Latin America and Caribbean had only eight per cent population this is new data in 2000 and rest three present again carried by others countries.
- Today most people get married and give birth in their thirties rather than when they are younger Is it a positive or negative development in your opinion To what extent do you support this development 61
- Planting trees is very important for the environment Some people say trees should be planted in the vacant areas of cities and towns While others believe housing facilities should be built instead Do you agree or disagree 89
- Some believe that pupils should be given less homework others say the opposite What is your opinion 78
- Children are facing more pressure nowdays from academic social and commercial perspective What are the causes of these pressure and what measure should be taken to reduce this 78
- In many countries traditional food is being replaced by international fast food This has negative effects on both families and societies To what extent do you agree or disagree 81
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: The
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'The' or 'The' is left.
Suggestion: The; The
The The pie chart illustrates information about...
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Line 2, column 94, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'whiled'.
Suggestion: whiled
... countries population figure shown have while, In starting of 21 century six countrie...
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Line 2, column 169, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... countries population data is displays. However In 1900 there was only 1.6 billion peop...
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Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...rried only one per cent less population then North America. Rest of six per cent equ...
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Line 4, column 56, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'revealed'.
Suggestion: revealed
...acific including former Soviet Asia was reveal four per cent downward trend then past ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, second, so, then, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1045.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83796296296 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33255700636 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6991774645 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.111111111 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 5.23603664747 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116229876878 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887205733328 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14619054618 0.0843802449381 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16587782886 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.192669686607 0.0819641961636 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.