TheThe given map illusrates the village of stokeford change from rural area to urban area in 1930 and in 21 century.
Overall, In 1930 stokeford is totally developing area but after 80 years stokeford turn into urban area. while, frameland is completely disappear by the house and construction of roads and respectively.
In 1930 in stokeford area from west-south to North East the river stoke connected both the area. However, east area is occupied by citizen by construction of road from North to south area which cross river with the help of bridge. In the left side of road houses are made by people and one primary school and gardens were also present. On the other side of the road two shops and one post office as well as houses had be developed by people. While North and west south area near by road is truely covered by framland.
In 21 century stokeford area become developed urban area because framland is perfectly converted into buildings , flats , not only but also houses. The area of primary school is also increase in 2010 and garden area is replaced by retirement home. While, construction of roads is also done by people in same area to introducted new houses around the road similarly shops are totaly replace by houses.Because of increase in poplution left right sides of road are completely covered by houses respectively.
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...n area. while, frameland is completely disappear by the house and construction of roads...
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...people. While North and west south area near by road is truely covered by framland. In...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, similarly, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1117.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85652173913 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62173513062 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508695652174 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 358.2 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.956107516 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.545454545 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 1.69756097561 1355% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113877694779 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546889378777 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759479017359 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109826803233 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797864927019 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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