At the out set of new millennium, education is maiden requirement of everyone not only for getting good job but also for own choice and freedom. It is that, most individuals get married and give birth in there thirties age, rather than whea they are teenagers. It is positive development my complete agreement will be articulated in upcoming paragraph before reaching conclusion.
It is noteworthy mention that, married to someone is personal choice of everyone nowadays. The main factor behind this circumstance is that now people are educated and they are more engaged with their career. For Instance : In India mostly people are related with working sector this increase India GDP by 80 per cent from formative years. Due to awareness among people about their career option because in past time people are not engaged with working center so, that is reason they get married in early years. Hence, it is enough to prove that by its is positive.
In addition to this, second the main factor decrease in population in UK. Owing to now with the awareness of sex education the population of UK decrease by 40 per cent from past years. Due to people are now aware about their rights and responsibilities. Therefore, it is benavolant awareness must be provide to people about their responsibilities.
To Sum Up, After the complete agreement from my mind that government must provide education to citizens about their rights. People also take appropriate steps to wards also take appropriate steps to wards development of country.
- In many countries people tend to move overseas or move to a different part of their country after their retirement Discuss why they do so and what the outcome of this situation is Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion 61
- Nowadays there is an increase in social problems involving young people because more parents spent time at work than with their children To what extent do you agree or disagree Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer 56
- The pie charts below give information about world population in 1900 and 2000 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your opinion 61
- In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, second, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in fact, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0395256917 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78423292918 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.051995757 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0714285714 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219067956364 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716331570648 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705274435041 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12490772493 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687030463946 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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