In the past, most people lived in small villages, where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays,
most people live in large cities where they only knew a few people in their area. What do you think
were the advantages and the disadvantages of living in small community?
In early years, an exorbitant amount of people used to dwell in a concrete villages, where they communicated with all of the other members of the villages. However, as the time passed by, people migrated in urban cities where they might hardly utter a word with unknown people.
In my opinion, there are certain pros and cons of living in a small villages.
During the past few years, communities were frequently shaped according to the occupation and religion the people belong to. For instance, in a diversified country like India, people with surnames as "Kumbhars" used to do pottery or "Brahmins" had the rights to worship God. Therefore, it was vital for the people to communicate with each other as each religion played unique roles. Moreover, communication mediums such as internet or telephones were yet to be discovered. Thus, may be it was substantial for the people to increase the communication within themselves.
On the other hand, having a small community might have certain number of consequences. For example, as explained earlier it might hinder the development on the basis of caste discrimination. If one's ancestors were into sports, owing to the fact that, he or she has interest in archery then, this can draw boundaries for the development. Moreover, this trend gradually decreased and hence, people started to migrate in the urban cities to embellish their skills. Therefore, people invented telephones to communicate with their communities from the village. However, may be because of digital mediums those are used for the communication has limited the friendliness among the people. People may speak only if they want to work or educate together. For instance, it has been researched that most of the people nowadays prefer texting on the mobile rather than speaking in person.
Thus, pacific small communities used to live in harmony and people were less alienated in regards with excessive amount of communication. While, villages may lack in terms of development as compared to urban societies. Likewise, may be it was crucial for the people to extend their boundaries so that they can develop. In my view, rural places might be less hectic, owing to the fact that, they should be educated more in terms of development in several fields.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18010752688 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01940361409 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529569892473 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7616642152 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.35 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241239347295 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745599706616 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516891496409 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139150747349 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0130902874511 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.