The production,consumption and profit distribution of coffee around the globe is illustrated in the pie chart.
As observed it is evident that Europe consumes around 2/5 of the total in the world where as Americans are just 2% less by the Europe accounted for 39% consumption of coffee. The consumption by Japan is attributed to only 8% whereas the rest of the world is accumulated to 12% respectively.
On for Analyses South Africa is responsible for almost half of the coffee production in the world whereas Vietnam and Japan contributes to almost 2/5 of the coffee production and Indonesia alone is accounted for 22%. The profit distribution of the coffee is divided into four sectors, the half of the profit is generated by delivering the coffee where as 10% is the least by exports, retailers and producers or accumulated to around 40% of the profit to this coffee industry.
Overall it can be established that the major chunk of profit comes by deliveries and prominent consumers and producers of coffee are Europe and South Africa respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01704545455 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16472172311 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477272727273 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.3017420572 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.166666667 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332172500632 0.215688989381 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170326183677 0.103423049105 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106962062358 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209823266909 0.15604864568 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113328802582 0.0819641961636 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 61.2550243902 69% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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