The pie charts below show the online sales for retail sectors in Canada.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts information about online sales for retail sectors in Canada in the years 2005 and 2010.
Although, in the earlier year home furnishings made up a whole quarter of chart, however, in the later year it has decreased to 15%. In addition, in the year 2005 online sales of electronics and appliance for retail sectors have reduced to 30% from 35%.
On the other hand, price percentages of food, beverages and video games for retail sectors have risen up. Initially, the percent of food and beverages as well as virtual games were 22% and 18%, respectively. Nevertheless, it has increased to 32% and 23%, respectively, in the year 2010.
As a general trend, the percentages of home utilities as well as electronics and appliance decreased in the year 2010, while portions of food and drinks have been decreased.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 6, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'charts'' or 'chart's'?
Suggestion: charts'; chart's
The charts information about online sales for reta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, nevertheless, well, while, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 681.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 139.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89928057554 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78371717502 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553956834532 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 201.6 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3635293276 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2857142857 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 5.23603664747 213% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166854255082 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935764973899 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122802850042 0.0843802449381 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135298200287 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135418170224 0.0819641961636 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.