The charts illustrate the utility of water on different aims in six continents of the world.
Overall, the information about water usages focuses on three uses: Industrial use, Agricultural use, and Domestic use. Plus, it is clear that there are two groups of sections which are industrial and agricultural.
First of all, regarding the farming areas ( Central Asia, Africa, South East Asia, and South America ), the proportions water use for agriculture occupy almost all of the charts 71%, 81%, 84% and 88%, led by Central Asia. Moreover, Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia show nearly the same water usage for household (7% to 7% to 9%), but there is a slightly huge difference in South America (17%). The remaining part which is Industrial use is distinct to each other (10% in South America, 7% in Africa, 5% in Central Asia, 12% in South East Asia)
The consumption of water for industrial accounts for the largest amounts in North America and Europe ( almost half of the two charts 48% in North America and 53% in Europe). On the contrary, the two sections still balance the amount of water use for industry and agriculture which is near to the percentage of industrial use 39% and 32%). The rest of the charts illustrate a little difference (13% to 15%)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...gest amounts in North America and Europe almost half of the two charts 48% in Nor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1045.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81566820276 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57555225242 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516129032258 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 316.8 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.9160946829 43.030603864 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.625 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.125 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 5.23603664747 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196413437439 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104936475085 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584023411806 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144454290335 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503329555843 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.