The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The pie charts illustrate the prevalence of a range of methods by which people can keep themselves well-informed in Canada and Australia
Overall, the main ways of staying up-to-date in those aforementioned countries are by going online and watching TV. In contrast, the method referred as “ not specified “ is used by the least number of people living in these countries.
As per the chart, a prominet number of Australians read articles on the Internet, and this crosses the halfway mark with 52%, while this figure in Canada is relatively lower with 36%. However, the most popular way of obtaining news in Canada is from Tv, which almost equalizes those who get them from online sources with each category accounting for 40% and 36%, respectively. On the other hand, the reading of online news in Australia is 15% more pervasive than getting hold of information through Tv
As far as other categories are concerned, Australia witnessed the same proportion of people listening to radio news and those who get day-to-day information through unspecified sources with just under 5%. In addition, the share of people reading prints in Canada doubles that of australia with 14%. Last but not least, although listening to the radio in Canada is more widely known than that in Australia, this share only takes up approximately one-tenth of the overall proportion within the nation
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, while, in addition, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1167.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11842105263 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7788713606 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587719298246 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.1864721702 43.030603864 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.714285714 112.824112599 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5714285714 22.9334400587 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 5.23603664747 213% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176473106536 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786990076666 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542440724554 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113128138462 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463196419201 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.2329268293 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.