The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries China and India Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data Write at least 150 words

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The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries; China and India.
Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
Write at least 150 words.

The pie charts illustrating the amount of consumption of four types of food across the world. The figures show compression of the two countries used the food in the year of 2008.
Overall, In China and India were presented the different of consumption food as compare the average with worlds rate. Out of all, the processed food had the largest consume in all of three pies.
Particularly, the consumption of proceed food was the largest number at 41% in the word’s rate. Followed by vegetable and fruits were standing at 29%. Then the third consumption with 26% according to animal food. Lastly, nuts and seeds recording at 4%.
Similarly, in India the processed food was the highest number of consumptions that was 39%. It was the largest proportion. And the vegetables and fruits which was similarity to words rate approximately 25%. On the other hand, the second proportion for consumption recorded to animal food at 27%. Additionally, the nuts and seeds the lower proportion in Indian people stopped at 11%
In China, the most two consumption of food type at 2008 were processed food and vegetables and fruits recorded at 34% and 23% respectively. Nuts and seeds used in this country showed the third proportion among making up 19%.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, second, similarly, then, third, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96172248804 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79477448206 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5975770368 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0714285714 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9285714286 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291304132309 0.215688989381 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102569823298 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730440692687 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185372224623 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576649309392 0.0819641961636 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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