The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries China and India Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data Write at least 150 words

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The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries; China and India.
Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
Write at least 150 words.

The pie charts are depicting the consumption of four food types across the globe in 2008. The figures show a comparison of the amounts of food used in China and India in the same year.

Overall, the two nations presented dissimilar patterns of food consumption as compared to the average of the world. Out of all, processed food consumption had the largest shares of percentages in all the three charts.

Particularly, the consumption of processed food was the highest in the world, accounting for 41%, followed by vegetables and fruits at 29% and animal food at a quarter. The consumption of nuts and seeds only consisted 4%.

Similarly, China consumed 39% of the processed food, making it the one with the largest proportion. Animal food exhibited an identical figure, which is similar to the world’s average of 25%. Vegetables and fruits were used at 23%, while nuts and seeds showed less than a half figure.

In India, both vegetable and processed food were used the most in 2008 with 34% and 32% respectively. Nuts and seeds used in this country showed the largest proportion among the three given charts, making up 19%.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
similarly, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9375 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68863025329 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.1562375033 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1818181818 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.81818181818 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26985145664 0.215688989381 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106574423824 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058128508466 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157235076418 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478504297009 0.0819641961636 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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