The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007.
The pie charts represent the six reasons (formal study, accompany, looking for work, definite job, no reason started and other reasons) for people to come in and left the UK in the year of 2007.
Overall, it is clear that the main factor influencing this decision was employment.
The largest portion was dedicated to definite job of 30% of people immigrated to the UK and 29% of them emigrated from the UK. A large number of people, 22%, also emigrated because they were looking for a job, whereas people who entered into the UK for the same reason had recorded of 12%.
The reasons for accompanying had showed the similar proportion of 15% immigrated and 13% emigrated. Similarly, other reasons had the small differences between immigration and emigration proportions of 11% and 14% respectively.
In contrast, there was a huge difference in the proportion of formal study reasons where 26% of people immigrated to the UK compared to 4% emigrated from the UK. In opposite, 6% of people immigrated to the UK whereas 18% of people emigrated from the UK for no reasons
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
... and 29% of them emigrated from the UK. A large number of people, 22%, also emigrated because the...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'look', 'similarly', 'so', 'whereas', 'in contrast', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.272300469484 0.268076937826 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.154929577465 0.116061578633 133% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0704225352113 0.0759168565197 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0140845070423 0.0366838410393 38% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0140845070423 0.0131127313244 107% => OK
Prepositions: 0.140845070423 0.155750635184 90% => OK
Participles: 0.075117370892 0.0379272487307 198% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.77864419585 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0281690140845 0.0210936926555 134% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.107981220657 0.0948980150116 114% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0093896713615 0.00967000014798 97% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1069.0 1161.00487805 92% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.9 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84153005464 5.90752243213 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73763899035 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.355191256831 0.337110787985 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.273224043716 0.247514529752 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.174863387978 0.171178102325 102% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.142076502732 0.112407865282 126% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77864419585 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530054644809 0.546246751206 97% => OK
Word variations: 45.308158668 49.3433353143 92% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 22.875 23.0094962315 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6978025241 42.9750493124 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.625 135.714022679 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 23.0094962315 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.689975730869 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.84146341463 130% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 50.1974043716 47.7609492067 105% => OK
Elegance: 2.66666666667 2.94281807926 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.560329030014 0.418131533498 134% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.188526166385 0.181151798455 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.14851741854 0.0850326197045 175% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.864585085321 0.706616315825 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0937486063861 0.157042692854 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.318357901489 0.228904883108 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133329584607 0.108899403657 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.195197728393 0.367819155151 53% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.110703530055 0.0812612215331 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.357984080789 0.316326947829 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144760056609 0.0921553760075 157% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70731707317 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.14146341463 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.08536585366 24% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 0.956097560976 209% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.