The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007.
The provided circular chart reveals the date about the key causes for migration by people to and from UK in 2007. The data is calibrated in per centum.
Overall, it is evident that the main reason for both imigration and emmigration is definite jobs. While, people emmigrate least for formal studies.
Now turning to the details, the three tenth of the fraction of pie chart reveals the need of definite job as main reason for immigration . While, least percentage was mentioned for stating no reasons for immigration (6%). Moreover, for accompanying or joining someone, looking for work, formal study and other reasons was (only 15%, 12%, 26% and 11% respectively) responsible for migration to UK.
In addition, details from other pie chart shows that 29% of total defines the necessity of definite jobs. Whereas, other 71% of reasons are distributed among; looking for work (22%), accompaning someone(13%), formal study(4%), other(14%) and no reasons stated(18%).
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the least'.
Suggestion: , the least
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, moreover, so, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23376623377 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70801792502 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623376623377 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1956056456 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5555555556 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.481842732627 0.215688989381 223% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172583035672 0.103423049105 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0969448985969 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260778643648 0.15604864568 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066667082025 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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