Plan A below shows a health centre in 2005. Plan B shows the same place in the present day.
First diagram illustrates a health centre in 2005 whereas second one gives information on it in the present day.
In general, the given area experienced urbanisation with addition of children's play area. Moreover, the reception desk has removed from the centre of this given area as well.
In the north-western part, minor operations room has been built near the Physiotherapy. CR3 has been replaced reception desk,children's play area,and entrance. In the south- eastern part, CR1 and CR2 have been constructed in the previous space of entrance. The office has stayed remained in the present day.
Turning to the east side, CR3 has been built at the expense of CR1 and also, CR4 has been located in the CR2's place. After reception desk was removed, the centre of this area has enlarged significantly. Then, Physiotherapy room has remained unchanged in the north- east as well as garden. Finally, car parking has many spaces than in 2005 from 12 to 30 spaces in the present day.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s information on it in the present day. In general, the given area experienced u...
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Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , childrens
...py. CR3 has been replaced reception desk,childrens play area,and entrance. In the south- e...
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Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...laced reception desk,childrens play area,and entrance. In the south- eastern part, C...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, moreover, second, so, then, well, whereas, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98170731707 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80733587966 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573170731707 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.1372678807 43.030603864 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.2727272727 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9090909091 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 5.23603664747 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126468417157 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514488680852 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668059182263 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930762993915 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738198135624 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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