Plan A below shows a health centre in 2005 Plan B shows the same place in the present day

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Plan A below shows a health centre in 2005. Plan B shows the same place in the present day.

The plans illustrate the development of a health centre from 2005 to the present day.
Overall, it is clear that some major changes have been taken place to the health centre.

First of all, the only room which remain unchanged in health centre since 2005 is physiotherapy room. There is an extra minor operations room being added next to it, thus the size of the garden has decreased. In present day, there are more seats available to the patients than that in 2005. In addition, there are 4 consulting rooms now compared to that in the year 2005 which had only 3 rooms. The main entrance is,not...

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