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The plan below shows the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

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The given plans illustrate the site of an airport now as well as projections for next year redevelopment.
Overall, the number of gates is expected to significantly increase and more commercial services will likely be opened inside the complex.
Taking a closer look at the maps, in the departures area, the check-in stall will be transformed into a bag shop, while the old café will be replaced with the check-in stall. However, a new café will be opened at the bottom left corner of the area and another entrance door will be built next to the old one.
Regarding the arrivals zone, two new services will be added namely a café and an ATM on the right side of this zone. What is more, another exit door is going to be planted in addition to the old one and there will be a car hiring service at the bottom right corner.
Most importantly, the host of gates to the plane will be more than doubled (from 8 to 18) and the walkway which is situated more on the western side, will be reconstructed into a sky train system in the middle of the hallway.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'departures'' or 'departure's'?
Suggestion: departures'; departure's
...aking a closer look at the maps, in the departures area, the check-in stall will be transf...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, regarding, well, while, in addition, as well as, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43298969072 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47901169629 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567010309278 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.8000665483 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.857142857 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7142857143 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4285714286 5.23603664747 218% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100449493339 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621128361115 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621322102732 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737851912205 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699685194937 0.0819641961636 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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