The given map provided the information about the present plan of University’s sports centre and in the future how it will looks after redevelopment. In general,the center will be changed considerable over the period.
In present, University’s sports centre has two outdoor court's but it will be demolished in this place. In future, the sports center will be established a gaint center where have included all types of Sports necessary things. Now, this court has reception which will be remain that place. Furthermore, after entrance the center to the Southeast side will have cafe shop and another direction of the southwest side will be constructed to a sports shop and both sides corner will be renovated two changing room which is now just one changing room. After that, we move to the right side of the reception then we get a sports hall which will be extended in the after age that has not been developed till now. In additional, the present sports center has just one small size area taken but it will be reconstructed and will earn a big place. Also, in the west area has outdoor court's but it will be modernised a leisure pool.in contrast, there another changing room, pool, and seating area will be remain there place.
To conclude, the sports center will be dramatic changed from present to future. There outdoors courts totally vanished there place and reconstructed the dance studio and also a leisure pool after that sports shop and cafe shop renovated and added the changing room.
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...tructed and will earn a big place. Also, in the west area has outdoor courts but ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, look, so, then, in addition, in contrast, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 1.00243902439 1397% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 965.302439024 130% => OK
No of words: 255.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90980392157 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60258647559 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474509803922 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 377.1 283.868780488 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5306482275 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.818181818 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 5.23603664747 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.09268292683 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194806995349 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101808663669 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729716847068 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162945954911 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736290630608 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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