The pie chart illustrates information about the anthropology how did graduate from one University after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the percentage of salaries next five year of 3 categorise of graduates in three different types of employment.
As we can see from the pie chart, there was the highest percentage of full-time work it was 52% employee of anthropology graduates. However, the part-time work nad postgrad study was the lowest percentage of anthropology graduates in 5% of one University. In additional, 8% of fulltime and non know related employee was work at graduates. In contrast, unemployed and Only part-time worker had one-third percentage of than higher percentage.
The percentage of salary who works after 5 years at anthropology graduates. There had 4tyoes of catagories next 5 years Graduation. Freelance consultants employee is getting between 25000 dollar to 49999 dollar and it will take almost 5% and it increase after 4 years and it will be reached 100,000 dollar in 40%. The highest percentage of earn salaries of government sector and it will be climed gradually from 5% to 50%. Contrary, private companies will br increased first two time it’s last next higher salary 50 thousand dollar to 74 thousand dollar respectively. Then it decrease slowly Between 25% in 75 thousand dollar and 30% in 100 thousand dollar plus salaries time.
Briefly, it can be clear that in chart and the table there is an upward trends of anthropology graduates employee and the salaries of after getting 25 thousand dollar to next 5year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, first, however, if, then, third, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 965.302439024 138% => OK
No of words: 256.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21875 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96273032794 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53515625 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 283.868780488 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7109289952 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.769230769 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283864114821 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112372085506 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113398096381 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216826650137 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.164118531253 0.0819641961636 200% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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