The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
The two maps illustrate some changes that will take place in a university's sports center.
Overall, the main difference will be the appearance of new facilities involving new types of sports. It also can be seen that there will be a development of the two outdoor courts.
At present, after entering the entrance of the building, there is a reception, a 25-meter swimming pool behind it and a gym at the back. People can access a changing room by the door on the left of the pool or go to a seating area by the door on the right of the reception. There are outdoor courts to the west and east of the building.
After redevelopment, two outdoor courts will be merged with the center building. The gym is planned to be enlarged to the east. Moreover, the outdoor courts on the right are predicted to be replaced by a sports hall. Two new dance studios will be erected to the east, while to the east-south of the building, there will be a new changing room and a cafe established. Another replacement that will occur is the removal of outdoor courts to build a leisure pool to the west of the building. The sports center also saw the establishment of a new changing room and a sports shop to the west-south.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Line 7, column 563, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a sport' or simply 'sports'?
Suggestion: a sport; sports
...stablishment of a new changing room and a sports shop to the west-south.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51583710407 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68262832839 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443438914027 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1491661945 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1666666667 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.09268292683 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12299614471 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543554193845 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381612084474 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840923371814 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493174525479 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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