In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is argued that printed newspapers and books will no longer be purchased in the course of time due to the replacement by free ones online. I completely disagree with this sentiment since some reasons are explained in this essay.
To begin with, I personally disapprove of the statement mentioned in the beginning because online publications are not suitable for all generations. To be specific, old people often find it difficult to read magazines or news on the internet due to their eye conditions. For instance, my grandparents can not enjoy their reading time completely if they use a phone or a computer as the words are small and the light from the screen strain their eyes. Besides, a large number of people getting used to the printed books and reading materials find it even harder to familiarise with online ones. As a result, no matter how developed and affordable the technology is towards the existence of reading materials, some people will keep buying printed products.
However, some people still claim that these books and magazines will be replaced in the future. They may think that the chance of reading a large amount of information without paying for fees will reduce the number of people selecting printed ones. But, I strongly believe there are still people having preference for the latter. In other words, everyone has their own way to choose the most convenient way to read depending on their different financial status and situations. Take an IT employee as an example, after a week working with computers, he would prefer reading a printed newspaper in his leisure time to looking at a screen again. It seems that both offline and online methods do not have the ability to substitute the other one.
To sum up, although some people believe printed publications will not be essential at a later time as an increase in the free reading online, I am of the opposite view since the latter is not the choice of all generations as well as the preference of people for the former.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 462, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... the screen strain their eyes. Besides, a large number of people getting used to the printed book...
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Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'peopled'.
Suggestion: peopled
...But, I strongly believe there are still people having preference for the latter. In ot...
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Line 5, column 484, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...t financial status and situations. Take an IT employee as an example, after a week wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, look, may, so, still, well, for instance, as a result, as well as, in other words, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86918604651 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65497863905 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543604651163 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.887403121 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.642857143 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272330542633 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906917365383 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050891680343 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167071449078 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483399701815 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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