The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
The graph illustrates the amount of electricity that was generated and consumed by ten highest-ranking countries in 2014.
Overall, most nations used less electricity than how much they produced, except for Germany. It worth noting that China and United State had the far higher amounts of electricity generated and consumed than others.
In 2014, China ranked first with over 5,000 billion kWh of electricity produced then used. The second largest electricity producer and consumer, the US, generated 4,099 billion kWh and used 3,866 billion kWh.
Looking at the remaining countries, Russia was the only one that had over 1,000 billion kWh of electricity in production and consumption, followed by Japan and India with the figures ranging from 698.8 to 936.2 billion kWh. There were few differences in the amounts of electricity generated and used among other countries which was around 450 billion kWH to 620 billion kWh. While others showed higher figures of electricity production compared to that of consumption, Germany was the only country generated 526.6 billion kWh but used 582.5 billion kWh.
- Many museums charge for admission while others are free Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 73
- Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar which causes many health problems Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar Do you agree or disagree 78
- Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things Other people think advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it Discuss Both views and give your opinion 78
- The graph shows the amount of fruit produced in four countries France Spain Germany Turkey from 1970 to 2010 61
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your opinion 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, then, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41954022989 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71646428782 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563218390805 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 227.995964877 43.030603864 530% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 188.6 112.824112599 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.8 22.9334400587 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 5.23603664747 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15981512065 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102329841192 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534723471521 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115978702719 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511241101901 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 13.2329268293 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.