The two layouts of university sports centre illustrate the formation of redeveloped future plans.overall it is clear that the new constructed sports centre will be bigger as it is going to be facilitated with additional features.
As is observed there will be a leisure pool constructed on western side and
Sports hall on the other side of main sports centre building which will be replaced by 2 former outdoor courts.however,the 25m pool surrounded by reception, seating room, changing room will be unchanged except the gym area will be extended.
There is a plan to build 2 changing rooms in 2 opposite corner of reception area.Moreover, the inclusion of cafe and a sports shop beside right and left hand side of the entrance beside changing rooms have to be considered as future plan.It is also clear from the second layout that the redeveloped sports centre is going to be a fully indoor one.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mathematics. Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer. 60
- The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons whee relevant. 61
- Some people think that the government wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view? 69
- Some people believe that people who read books can develop more imagination and language skills than those who prefer to watch TV. Discuss both views and give your own opinions. 56
- Some people think that children would benefit if they attend nursery school before primary school while some people think that children should stay all day with their families. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...cted on western side and Sports hall on the other side of main sports ce...
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...laced by 2 former outdoor courts.however,the 25m pool surrounded by reception, seati...
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...to build 2 changing rooms in 2 opposite corner of reception area.Moreover, the inclusi...
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... in 2 opposite corner of reception area.Moreover, the inclusion of cafe and a sports sho...
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...right and left hand side of the entrance beside changing rooms have to be conside...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 749.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92763157895 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99462092783 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565789473684 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 22.4926829268 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.697840058 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 249.666666667 112.824112599 221% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.6666666667 22.9334400587 221% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 5.23603664747 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164526466085 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126098476086 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360623501936 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105875182265 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495211503127 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.1 13.2329268293 205% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 29.19 61.2550243902 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 10.3012195122 210% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.9970731707 200% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 11.0658536585 199% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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