Nurturing a Child in a correct way has been a controversial issue. some people think that sending the children to a school in an early age before academic education is beneficial for them while others stand with the opinion that they should be in their home in early age. In my point of view, both approach have some positive and negative consequences to discuss with.
School is the place where children become socialized and mould their character to become well mannered.In early growth if children interact with other infants they can become more friendly and develop their intellectual behaviours. behaviours those children gather in early age definitely reflect their future when they can express their social norms and attitudes. For example, in a study generated by scientist demonstrated demonstrate that if children between 0 to 4 years of old are nurtured well then they become more intelligent and Well behave in the future because 50% of brain growth happens in early age. Moreover, in Nursery School the teachers are well trained to impart the social and intellectual values among those students. Furthermore, in primary school level it will be easier for students to corporate well when they attentive on their curriculum study.
On the othet hand, parents have the opposite opinion that early age is crucial for their child that's why they should stay at home. First of all, parents are the most intimate friend of a child, mothers play a vital role in developing child's growth. No one in the world can take care of a child the way a mother takes care of. their parents inculcate the knowledge among children in more playfull way. Moreover they can take great physical care.
To conclude that is undeniably the fact that parents are the first a teacher who motivate children intellectually physically and mentally but and nursery school teachers are well trained to stimulate do's and don'ts while they can be accustomed with social norms and plant interacting from their peer students.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05421686747 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60441689658 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545180722892 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.8650486556 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.857142857 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293959715016 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939269929024 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836886033228 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179379456879 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791651990896 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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