It is deliberated by many people that in modern society they have vast options for everything. In my opinion, i agree people have variety of choices in basic necessity menu like food and education.
First and foremost, for is one of the primary requirements of every human being for survival, they have many options to choose the consumption.whereas, in the earlier days, there were only a few choices likely homemmade food and local foods in edible products at a competitive rate. Moreover, today, global cuisines and food brands are available in most parts of the world to the customers. For example, a couple of decades ago, in Bangladesh , only traditional food was available in eateries, but nowadays, many multinational restaurants and food joints offering a variety of authentic Italian, Mexican, Chinese, Asian, and many more dishes.
On the other hand, education is the key to build a successful career in any domain. A few years ago, academic institutes were educating in conventional ways with limited sources, however, nowadays colleges and universities are tying up with world-renowned educational institutes to teach plenty of subjects innovatively. One clear example, in one of the colleges in sylhet has affiliated with a recognized international university for the post-graduate program and pupils gets best of both, by attending virtual classes using technological advancement.
In conclusion, the modern world offers a lot of alternatives in many aspects to everyone, and in my view, it will increase in the future for the betterment of society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, moreover, so, then, whereas, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3185483871 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21731617485 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620967741935 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.9278927965 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.555555556 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5555555556 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5555555556 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113665199856 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484054612709 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410444642163 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0730503840442 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499771055235 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.58 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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