The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons whee relevant.

THE TWO PLANS SHOWS UNIVERSITY SPORT CENTRE CURRENT PLAN AND PROPOSED RENOVATION PLAN. ACCORDING TO THE PLANS TOTAL SPACE FOR SPORT CENTRE PLANNED TO INCREASED

WHEN CONSIDERING MAJOR CHANGES GOING TO BE HAPPEN TWO OUT DOOR COURTS WILL BE REMOVE FROM THE SPORT CENTRE SPACE INSTEAD OF WEST OUTDOOR COURT PLANNED TO CONSTRUCT LEISURE POOL .IN THE SAME WAY EAST OUTDOOR COURT WILL BE REPLACED BY SPORT HALL. HOWEVER, MOST OF THE MAJOR RENOVATION WILL BE CARRY ON OUT SIDE THE MIDDLE BUILDINGS. ACCORDING TO THE FUTURE PLAN TWO NEW DANCE STUDIOS WILL BE CONSTRUCTED ON THE NORTH EAST SIDE OF THE SPORT CENTRE SPACE. ENTRANCE WILL NOT BE CHANGE, BUT A NEW CAFE AND A SPORT SHOP WILL BUILT ON AROUND THE RECEPTION TWO NEW CHANGING ROOMS WILL BE BUILT ON SOUTH WEST AND SOUTH EAST OF THE SPORT CENTRE. CURRENT GYM WILL BE EXPAND UP TO MET DANCE STUDIO

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...CE FOR SPORT CENTRE PLANNED TO INCREASED WHEN CONSIDERING MAJOR CHANGES GOING TO ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “WHEN” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...R SPORT CENTRE PLANNED TO INCREASED WHEN CONSIDERING MAJOR CHANGES GOING TO BE H...
^^^^
Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... COURT PLANNED TO CONSTRUCT LEISURE POOL .IN THE SAME WAY EAST OUTDOOR COURT WILL ...
^^
Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: OUT_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: Outside
...F THE MAJOR RENOVATION WILL BE CARRY ON OUT SIDE THE MIDDLE BUILDINGS. ACCORDING TO THE ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 519, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'WILL' requires the base form of the verb: 'build'
Suggestion: Build
...E, BUT A NEW CAFE AND A SPORT SHOP WILL BUILT ON AROUND THE RECEPTION TWO NEW CHANGIN...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 685, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...YM WILL BE EXPAND UP TO MET DANCE STUDIO
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, in the same way

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 700.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6357615894 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19324310943 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53642384106 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 201.6 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.5036831663 43.030603864 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 116.666666667 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178093709465 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106894416419 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683913011192 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176012518723 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561605693045 0.0819641961636 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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