The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today
the plants below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today The maps outline the changes that took place in a public park called Grange park from 1920 to today.
Overall, the park was changed and renovated to offer people more possibilities than they used to have decades ago such as a cafe, theatre, playground and parking.
In details, the park was opened in 1920 and entertainment facilities including a larger stage and various areas for recreation have since been added to it. There was also notable relocation in terms of seats and the only areas that remained unchanged were the entrances and one minor garden. besides, the fountain has been removed in favour of a rose garden with full seating arrangements around it. To the left of the new garden, the previous stage for musicians has been turned into a much larger amphitheatre facing the opposite direction that will allow for concerts in the park. this change has necessitated the removal of both seatings on the far left side as well as the rose garden in the bottom left corner of the map.
Moreover, the pond for water plants was removed from the right -top part of the garden and a children's play area was introduced in the right-top of the park, and near this area, a cafe was built. Instead of the pond, a water feature has been built occupying the bottom right corner. Interestingly, the number of rose gardens was reduced to two. besides, an underground car park was built in the lower right corner of the park.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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the plants below show a public park when it...
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...at will allow for concerts in the park. this change has necessitated the removal of ...
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...l of both seatings on the far left side as well as the rose garden in the bottom left corn...
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...ber of rose gardens was reduced to two. besides, an underground car park was built in t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, moreover, so, well, as for, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 965.302439024 130% => OK
No of words: 268.0 196.424390244 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67164179104 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42552238347 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 106.607317073 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55223880597 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 283.868780488 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2892446321 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.818181818 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302597375927 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110460235448 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.200956602135 0.0843802449381 238% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237217814376 0.15604864568 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.277804239015 0.0819641961636 339% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.