The map shows the following year's southwest airport upgrade and reconstruction plans.
Generally, the plan is to upgrade the airplane's transportation capacity by building more terminals and infrastructures that can offer more service to passengers.
The current map illustrates eight terminals with a walkway for passengers to get on and off planes. However, in the future, the single terminal building will get a massive upgrade with a "Y-shape" terminal building reconstruction. In detail, there are about to build 12 new terminals. Only six old ones would be kept. With the new redevelopment of the terminal building, the walkway is about to be upgraded to a Carline due to the expansion of the building. Moreover, there is to build a shop in the building, too.
With more terminals, the airport is to serve more passengers. Right now, there is just one cafe in the departures hall outside the security passport control. In this plan, there would be a new bag drop in this hall. Moreover, the arrival hall is about to build another cafe, an ATM, and a Car hire spot. This redevelopment plan would level up the ability of passenger transportation and service of the southwest airport.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'airplanes'' or 'airplane's'?
Suggestion: airplanes'; airplane's
... Generally, the plan is to upgrade the airplanes transportation capacity by building mor...
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Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...uilding will get a massive upgrade with a 'Y-shape' terminal building r...
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Line 7, column 104, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'departures'' or 'departure's'?
Suggestion: departures'; departure's
...ight now, there is just one cafe in the departures hall outside the security passport cont...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12182741117 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19522886348 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53807106599 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7926451002 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6153846154 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1538461538 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.61538461538 5.23603664747 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0865061106209 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0324646566812 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349539674555 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0639085218381 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418048612936 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.