On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company In your letter describe the item you lost explain how you lost it tell

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to submit my request for covering the lost of my drone by the rules made in my travel insurance with the purchasing ID number: TI00000. I will explain this lost in details.

The Dji drone I bought last month was particularly for my trip shooting in Thailand. Before I my move to Bankok, I was recommended with the travel insurance by your agent Smith, which covered the loss of things that customer buy the service for. I made no hesitation to buy this service from you company becase of the price of Dji was so expensive. The trip was so good until I found my Dji flying camera was stolen in the fish market in Bankok. I called the agent to report this loss immediatelty after my calling for police, who reported no clue about it one week later.

In this case, I have to turn to you for help by the insurance guidance. I would kindly propose the request that you can pay for my loss. Meanwhile, more detail files are attached below. You can review them at your convenience.

I am truthfuly looking forward your response.

Sincerely,
Tony

Votes
Average: 8.1 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53266331658 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45823680895 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592964824121 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8979437737 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1666666667 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5833333333 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 4.34317383033 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206396932848 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760231416048 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693288890634 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130320674811 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704366871276 0.0580467560999 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.