Currently, there are various types of nationalities live in one country. Therefore, some people belive that staying with different cultures and distinct nationalities will assist the country develop significantly. From my point of view, I completely disagree with this situation. The following paragraph will demonstrate the reasons.
First of all, staying with various nationalities will decrease the chance of local people to find the works. For instance, the foreigners who stay in another country for a long period definitely want to find a constant job. As a result, it will affect to local people due to more highly competitive in society. Moreover, it is also one of the reason that cause unemployed in the country. Secondly, too many different cultural in the same country will cause many culture problems in society. For example, most of Thai people when they have the meeting, they will often late 5-10 minutes. However, the people who are not the punctual person in Europe people aspect means that person do not respect. Therefore, living with various nationalities will have many negative impact in society.
On the other hand, different nationalities in the same country will assist the economy of country develop faster because of exporting and importing in the international. For example, importing Chinese tea in England and exporting the rice of Thailand to Europe. However, living with different cultural backgrounds in one country will cause many issues in people society such as more competitive in people society.
In conclusion, I belive that staying with other nationalities will have more negative impacts than positive impact as aforementioned reason. Moreover, although it probably help the country development, it will affect to local people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42960288809 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8760171994 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494584837545 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7637498446 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4705882353 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2941176471 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64705882353 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334764535019 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107276307918 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962668700747 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221074225804 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900471230947 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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